Nice work, Scott! Thanks for making that change. I think Sharon is right: “some 3,500” is the safest way. Also, just a quibble: please add the semicolon: The Winnipeg General strike of 1919 was more than a six week strike in one city[;] it was an event with national and international reverberations. Thanks so much for doing this! julie
From: 1919-conference-bounces@lists.umanitoba.ca [mailto:1919-conference-bounces@lists.umanitoba.ca] On Behalf Of Scott Price Sent: Monday, February 19, 2018 10:32 PM To: 1919 conference organizing committee Subject: Re: [1919-Conference] article for Rank and File
Here is the updated version. Please let me know if any changed need to be made.
I will be sending this to the editors of Rank & File asap on the 20th. Scott
On Fri, Feb 16, 2018 at 5:06 PM, Scott Price <pricescott91@gmail.commailto:pricescott91@gmail.com> wrote: Hello, This is the write up for Rank and File.ca. I will also attach some of our graphics to use for the article. It should go up early next week. Please let me know if this is good to go. I wanted to make it fairly short and to the point. Thanks Scott